Here’s another one for the monthly poetry challenge over at Fake Flamenco. April’s challenge is to write a Prime Verse – a brand new form – around a theme of the wonder of experiencing the universe or the earth.
Here’s mine:
Look at the night sky –
the moon, stars, and velvet dark –
and know: you’re looking out, into, on, not up.
Do you tremble to be small?
Does it frighten you?
Or, instead, do you marvel,
find wonder, splendor, in the vastness of it?
Look at the night sky
and know: a whole world, the universe, is nigh.

I love this form that Rebecca has created! It’s got a nice ebb and flow, and feels just really fluid and lyrical. And of course, the theme this month was fun, too. If you want to participate, the deadline to post is April 10th at noon. I think you should! It’s always fun, after all, to try new things. 😊
I marvel. 😊 Beautiful poem Katie
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Thank you! 🙂
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I wonder what is a prime verse?
I don’t have much knowledge of the poetry, however I love the poem!!
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It’s a new form that Rebecca over at Fake Flamenco created. It was really fun! A good ebb and flow to it, I think.
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Actually I don’t/Can’t write poem so that why I was wondering.
Thank you for letting me know ☺️
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Of course! I linked to Rebecca’s blog in the post, and you should check it out. She does a poetry contest every month with a new theme and poetry form, and posts submissions from lots of different writers. It’s super fun!
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Ohhhhhh
I know several fellow bloggers who are very good at poetry, I will let them know.
You are a gem , thanks for this information.
Keep smiling Katie 😁🙇🏻♂️
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You do the same! 🙂
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