It scares you, doesn’t it?
Here in the dark,
hemmed in by the damp, whole smell of earth and air
and the endless lapping of the water,
the spindly fingers of the trees crawling their way up into the night,
you feel it, I know,
that you’re not alone.
Yes, I’m here, and I’ll talk,
if only because you want to,
though you won’t like what I say.
You’d do well to remember, my curious friend,
to look beyond your lens and listen past your recordings
and truly see –
there are worse things haunting this place,
terrors more frightening and damned creeping in
the shadows of this world,
than me.

Beautifully blended Katie
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Thank you!
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Pleasure
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Splendid & beautiful!
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Thank you so much!
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I had to go back to the whole series to remember this! The photograph is wonderful.
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Thank you! It’s one of Bill’s, and I hope he wouldn’t mind that I used it. He’s got so many good ones from all around the area. I’ve really enjoyed writing these poems. 🙂 It’s a fun way to welcome in the spooky season.
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A little spooky. Perfect for Halloween. Maggie
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Thank you! I’m so glad you liked it!
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What an eerie and atmospheric poem, Katie! That line warning curious listeners to ‘look beyond your lens and listen past your recordings’ gives absolute goosebumps—it’s such a clever spin on the investigator-ghost dynamic. I completely agreed with Monkey’s Tale (Maggie) that this sets the ultimate spooky mood for October! Like Suzassippi, it was so much fun reading back through the earlier EVP entries to see how the haunting narrative builds. Bill’s photograph paired wonderfully with your words!
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Thank you so much for this wonderful comment! It made my day! So glad you enjoyed the poem and the picture. 🙂
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You are so very welcome, Katie! That spine-tingling line and atmospheric picture really made the whole piece unforgettable. So glad to connect with your writing ☺️
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Thank you!
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I loved the imagery and emotions in this poem!
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Thank you! I love to hear that! Glad you enjoyed the poem.
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Creepy! (Literally)
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Thank you! That was the goal. 🙂 It’s spooky season!
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Gah! Spooky 👀
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Thanks! 🙂
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Chilling and beautifully written! The real horrors are often far more frightening than the things we fear in the dark.
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Yes, I’ve always thought so. Though I love a good ghost story. 🙂 So glad you enjoyed the poem!
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Thank you! 😊❤️ I’m glad you enjoyed the poem. There’s something special about a good ghost story and the way it stays with us long after we finish reading!
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Wait, isn’t it still early for Halloween? 👻🎃
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Nah! Halloween is October. October is Halloween. 😉
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Lovely poem! The imagery and emotions blend so well, a real pleasure to read
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Thank you so much!
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